MID-EVALUATION - More changes

'My latest idea is a suicide cult film. A few friends are waiting for another friend before a night out. When they meet him he kills himself, and then the others start killing themselves too, but nobody knows why.'
That idea is the same, but as the film only came out at around one minute and twenty seconds long, I needed to add to the idea. So the plot has been extended. Before we see them waiting for the night out, we first see the original 'suicide friend' on the phone, and then suddenly locked in a room, and heard shouting and being beaten up. Then another scene has been added of that friend getting ready, and the others. This is a contrast of the two different scenario's they find each other in. This should lead to more confusion, as we hear the person being beaten up, but then we see him kill himself. This is to add to my mysterious, surreal idea. If the opening starts off like this, it should keep the viewer indulged, and waiting to see more, so then they can finally find out what is happening.